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Posted on July 3, 2009

And now the hard part…

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Writing a novel is terrific fun. Editing it isn’t. But that’s the predicament I find myself in, as I’ve received the first round of extensive feedback from my wonderful new editor, and I’m slowly digging in for the long haul. The good news is, THE HOLE will be a much better novel as a result. The bad news is that it means my other writing projects must be a little backburnered so I can get the book on store shelves in a reasonable time.

I’ll try to post my thoughts as I go through this first experience editing a lengthy work. Words of encouragement are great, too, however…

Posted on March 8, 2009

THE HOLE lands a publisher

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I am thrilled to announce that my first novel, THE HOLE, has landed a publisher and will be coming to bookstores courtesy of the terrific folks at Permuted Press.  Permuted is the premier small press publisher for zombie and apocalyptic fiction, so it’s a perfect fit for the end-of-the-world adventures of THE HOLE.  These guys do amazing work, and were long time sponsors of the serialized version of the novel, so I’m quite excited to be working with them to get THE HOLE out as an honest-to-goodness print book.

Posted on February 17, 2009

Fluid Plotting and Viewpoint Characters

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My first novel wasn’t outlined prior to writing.  I’d constructed a backstory and had a general idea of how I wanted it all to end.  Along the way, I’d occasionally map out a handful of scenes in advance, but only if the writing wasn’t flowing.  I find this method more organic–and sticking to outlines had proved futile in the past.  Some genres, like the thriller or mystery, need structure, but generally I feel that stories tell themselves.  Too much planning makes them feel too planned.

When I finished The Hole and began work on Karaoke Quintessence, this preference was very much in mind.  KQ had the added benefit of being better formed in my mind.  A few years before the idea for The Hole had even occurred to me, I’d written forty-thousand words of something I was calling “Karaoke Quintessence.”  That’s roughly half way to a length that can be called a novel.  But it had sputtered out.  I didn’t like where the story was headed and that all important backstory wasn’t formed enough to give me an idea of where it would end.  So I set it aside, turned to The Hole, and ended up completing my first novel.

KQ was calling, however, and I liked the character, Jimmy Pete, I’d created as its protagonist.  The trouble was, I had another character, Alex Dale, I was itching to get to.  Alex has been around even longer than Jimmy, appearing in a short story I’d written many years ago, one that will appear in my upcoming short fiction anthology.  That story had a post-cyberpunk vibe, but Dale was easy enough to port to the newly developing Karaoke Quintessence.

That gave me two protagonists through whose eyes the novel would be told–and a third, Danny Weeks, was soon added.  I refer to these as “viewpoint characters” and I didn’t realize at the time how much trouble they can cause.

Telling a story from a single viewpoint is relatively easy.  You only have to worry about what happens to one person, and it’s difficult to lose track of him or her.  But multiple viewpoint characters means multiple story lines with multiple sets of events to keep track of.  A possible solution to the difficulty is to write one character’s story completely, then the next, then the next, and finally go back and intercut them into the novel as a whole.  Which is a fine plan, except that Karaoke Quintessence, like The Hole before it, was meant be serialized on my website as I wrote.

Had I outlined all of KQ before writing, this would’ve been easy.  I’d just follow the outline each day and post as I finished each chapter.  But this conflicts with my fluid plotting style.

The solution?  I cheated.  As everyone who’s read the last two chapters noticed, all three of my viewpoint characters were brought together.  Danny, Alex, and Jimmy found themselves in the same place at the same time and, for the foreseeable future, they will remain that way.  This makes alternating between them each chapter significantly easier, while allowing me to maintain the varying perspective on events that makes Karaoke Quintessence such a fun story to tell.

It’s a writing hack, so to speak, but it’s one that has granted KQ a newfound smoothness in crafting.

If my readers have further suggestions on how to handle such fluid plotting mingled with multiple viewpoint characters, write them up in the comments section below.  I’d love to hear how others have handled this issue.

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Karaoke Quintessence: A Serial Novel of Occult Crime and Mystery

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 11: Dead Flesh

None of them had an idea of what might have caused all this, but Danny was okay with that.  It was his curiosity about the words on his computer and the colors in his head that got him kidnapped in the first place and right now all he wanted was to get out of these [...]

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 10: Tunnel Rats

Jimmy spit dirt from his mouth.  His left arm hurt like hell, but it didn’t feel broken.  He tried to stand and couldn’t: a weight held him down, pressed across his lower back.  Jimmy rolled to his right, looking up.
The hole they were in was dark.  Far above—it was impossible to judge the distance—faint starlight [...]

Karaoke Quintessence: Interlude: Desh

She stared out the window the city lights and cars and rain.  Her breath fogged against the glass.  Behind her, Tedrow said, “Ms. DePaulo, I have word from the scouts.”
She turned her head to look at his reflection in the window.  “Yes?” she said.
“The beetle is gone.  We don’t know how he managed to get [...]

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 9: Rabbit Hole

Jimmy, Dale, and Danny find themselves in considerable trouble.

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 8: Mountain Cabin

Dale, Jimmy, and Danny finally meet—though under somewhat unfortunate circumstances.

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 7: Africans

Jimmy isn’t sure why he’s been kidnapped, but he knows the mysterious house in the mountains isn’t a sign of good things to come.

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 6: Black Wool Coat

Danny Weeks has a terrible run in with a mysterious stranger.

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 5: Caesar

Alex Dale follows his first lead on his mission for the tweens–and ends up in an odd little bar.

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 4: Freaks

Jimmy heads back to his hotel after his encounter with Ellison and soon realizes he may be in considerable danger.

Karaoke Quintessence: Chapter 3: Synesthesia

The introduction of Danny Weeks, a slacker with a very unusual problem.

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