Comments on: The Hole: Part 1

By: Aaron Ross Powell

Aaron Ross Powell — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 15:31:17 +0000

Thank you, George. Let me know what you think when you’re a little further in to the story.

By: Aaron Ross Powell

Aaron Ross Powell — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 13:31:17 +0000

Thank you, George. Let me know what you think when you're a little further in to the story.

By: George Donnelly

George Donnelly — Fri, 11 Jul 2008 15:27:21 +0000

Your first paragraph grabbed my attention. Well done! I’m going to keep reading.

By: George Donnelly

George Donnelly — Fri, 11 Jul 2008 13:27:21 +0000

Your first paragraph grabbed my attention. Well done! I'm going to keep reading.

By: Sophie

Sophie — Thu, 17 Jan 2008 13:54:48 +0000

I think this book is going to be a bestseller, it grabs you right from the start, and without action, I think that’s pretty good! Sophie, 15

By: Sophie

Sophie — Thu, 17 Jan 2008 10:54:48 +0000

I think this book is going to be a bestseller, it grabs you right from the start, and without action, I think that's pretty good!
Sophie, 15

By: Patrick McDonald

Patrick McDonald — Tue, 13 Nov 2007 01:05:00 +0000

I love your novel and am a aspiring writer my self . Keep up the good work

By: Patrick McDonald

Patrick McDonald — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 22:05:00 +0000

I love your novel and am a aspiring writer my self . Keep up the good work

By: Jeannie

Jeannie — Fri, 20 Jul 2007 23:36:48 +0000

Yeah. I agree ” keep it clean” the wording is a lot like Kings. Now is this the first page of the noval? or the first page os a second book? I am still working on my web site but I’ll remember the HOLE. Jeannie

By: Jeannie

Jeannie — Fri, 20 Jul 2007 21:36:48 +0000

Yeah. I agree " keep it clean" the wording is a lot like Kings. Now is this the first page of the noval? or the first page os a second book?
I am still working on my web site but I'll remember the HOLE.
Jeannie