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Aaron Ross Powell

Posted on May 18, 2007

The Hole: Part 6

The Hole

Evajean rolled down the truck’s window and leaned out. “Jesus,” she said.

“This the furthest out you’ve been?” Elliot asked. They’d decided to drive through town towards the freeway, a route that would take them past a Wal-Mart where they hoped to pick up rifles and ammunition. This was Evajean’s idea and Elliot had been brought around to seeing it as a good one. They had a lot of desirable items in the truck and no way of knowing how bad things were out beyond the borders of town. Neither knew how to use firearms but they figured if they stuck to shotguns and only then as items to point threateningly, not so much to actually shoot, the could avoid most trouble. After that brief stop, it’d be two days of driving on I-70 before they hit Colorado.

Evajean shook her head. “I went out—to the Wal-Mart, actually—back just before Henry got sick, since we were out of things, but once he started— Once things got bad, I stayed home.” She rolled the window up again and leaded back in her seat, closing her eyes. “I didn’t know they were this bad.”

Abandoned cars made the driving difficult. Elliot had to keep his speed down and carefully weave, since the roads were clogged with vehicles, some with their doors open like the passangers had been too much in a hurry to even both closing up, and some with their windshields or side windows smashed out. But neither Elliot nor Evajean had seen a single other person since they’d set out thirty minutes ago.

Outside of their neighborhood, there’d been out buildings, street lights and power lines knocked and torn down, and a pet store with the back end of a large van sticking out the huge front windows. At this last they’d stopped, Elliot saying that maybe they should see if there were any animals still trapped inside. Evajean laughed, but agreed.

The result was a tiny black puppy curled asleep on the bench seat behind them, probably exhausted from lack of food. They’d given it water, which it lapped mightily, and searched the store for dog food, but found none. Wal-Mart would have some, Evajean said, and they’d added that to their shopping list right under buckshot.

The devastation they passed now, as they finally cleared the main downtown of Charlottesville and drove into the thinning residential areas between them and the big box store, was more subtle—but equally frightening. Most of the houses had open doors and windows and at several they saw clothes tossed across the lawn. Nothing moved and the emptiness and odd clutter heightened the sense of a world gone.

“I always thought it’d be gorier,” Evajean said after several minutes. The stopped cars were less dense now and Elliot had increased their pace.

“What?”

“The end of the world. I mean those—you’ve seen them—those zombie movies. Day of the Dead, Dawn of the Dead—”

“Night of the Living Dead,” he said.

“Those. Everyone’s killed and torn up, there are bodies and fires.”

“We saw those burned buildings.”

She shrugged. “But I guess I thought there’d be more. Where is everyone?”

“I don’t know,” he said.

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  • Part 8
    Evajean was back to staring out the window now, and Elliot wished he could say more to her, tell her anything. But he drove the rest of the way in silence, occasionally letting himself wander back to this newest mystery but never with real concentration. They’d find answers as soon as the road
  • Part 45
    She was right. The truck, an ancient vehicle rubbed clean of paint, like a dust bowl relic too far east, was tucked into a wooden shack too small for anything else. A wooden door on metal slides had been pushed aside a couple of feet by Evajean, and they both had to put
  • The Hole: Part 63
    They looked at each other. More gibberish, Elliot thought. More useless information that did nothing to sort out their mad situation. And so he laughed. “You think I’m joking?” Melvin said. He held the book close to his face again and read. “They will come, woman and man. They will
  • Part 12
    There weren’t many cars on the freeway. Most people, when faced with the prospect of widespread death, shied away from road trips, heading home instead to care for immediate family—or just to hole up in the house and hope the disaster somehow missed them. It’s exactly what Elliot had done. This meant
  • Part 33
    “Look,” he continued, “we won’t even split up. Just stay right here, right next to me, and if it looks like they’re going to try anything funny, we’ll just take off into the woods. Worst that can happen is we run into some crazies but, then, that’s what we seem to have already

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    Erik said:

    wow, starting to get very good! I really like the way the story is heading!



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    Xian B. said:

    “the could avoid most trouble”

    “too much in a hurry to even both closing up”



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